Story Notes
This is my variation of a popular urban legend.
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     You thought I had forgotten your sweater, didn't
you? That maybe I had just thrown it over the back seat to collect dust until
we went out again. I still consider it a stroke of luck us meeting the way we
did, you standing by the roadside in your prom dress, me just driving home
from being stood up on a date. I have never been one to believe in divine
providence before, but it just seems like it was one of those "meant to be"
moments.
     When I pulled over and asked you if you needed a lift,
I didn't really think you'd say yes. I figured the way you were dressed you
were waiting for your tuxedoed boyfriend to show up. I don't know why it
didn't click then that you were wearing a prom dress in the middle of
October.
     I asked you where you lived and you gave me directions
that took us down backcountry roads. It was a nice drive, and we made small
conversation along the way. Maybe if we had known each other previously we
would have had more to talk about, but as it was I was just content to hear
your name. "Elisabeth," you told me, as you took off the thin sweater you were
wearing, the kind girls sometimes just draped over their shoulders when their
strapless dresses left them a little too exposed to the night air.
     I took it from you and casually set it over in the
back seat. "I won't forget it," I promised.
     I asked you if you were going somewhere, dressed up
as you were, and you smiled at me. "Yes, I went to the prom."
     "Which prom?"
     "Central high."
     I nodded. Having just moved here I wasn't overall
familiar with local schools, so I took you at your word. There was no need for
me to doubt you, especially when we passed your friends at the roadside.
     They were just standing there, just like you had been,
as if they were waiting for a ride themselves. A boy and a girl they were
holding hands. The boy look drenched, as if he'd just taken a bath with his
clothes on. The girl was dressed a lot like you, in her prom dress. Hers was
black though, and the white corsage she wore wasn't affixed properly.
     I asked if you knew them and you told me you did."Do
you want me to stop and pick them up?"
     You reached over and touched my hand. "I just want to
go home", you said. You curled your fingers around my hand, and your touch
sent shivers up my shine. I couldn't believe my lucky stars. I was riding with
a beautiful girl and she was holding my hand. How much better could it get?
     As we drove along I tried to think of things to say,
points of conversation that would interest you. After all, I had just met you,
how would I know things you liked or didn't like. So I turned on the car
stereo. One of my favorite CDs was loaded and soon it was blaring from the
speakers. Rob Zombie. I could tell you didn't like it much. Maybe I had it
turned it up too loud, so I turned it down a bit, the song 'Living Dead Girl'
fading quietly in the background.
     "I guess you don't like Metal much," I said, seeing
the distasteful look upon your face.
     "I like David Cassidy," you replied, and then began
to hum a few bars of 'I Think I Love You'.
     I didn't know whether to laugh or confess my mom liked
him too. I guess music was going to be one of those things we didn't have in
common. Finally I just turned it off and let the hum of the engine be the only
sound.
     Still you hummed your song though, and I felt your
hand grip mine tighter. I looked over at you, and your other hand had gripped
the passenger door handle as if you were either going to jump out or were
trying to keep something from getting in.
     "Are you okay? I asked.
     "Watch out!" you screamed, and I turned my attention
back to the road. We were coming up on a covered bridge, its entrance looking
like a dark gaping mouth. But it wasn't the entrance that had caused your
scream. It was the fact we were going to miss the bridge entirely. Somehow in
diverting my attention to you I had managed to swerve off the dirt road and we
were going to go over an embankment and into the river below.
     I slammed on the brakes and turned the wheel. We
skidded and slid into the bridge with a crash. My rear fender had spun around
and hit one side of the bridge. The collision with the bridge kept the car
from going completely off the road. Unfortunately the rear of the car had
smashed through the covered bridge wall and was now perched in the open air
over the river. We were precariously balanced on bridge and air.
     I told you to very slowly get out of the car. You
opened up the car door and very carefully got out. Your eyes shifted to the
back seat, where your sweater lay.
     "Don't worry, I got it," I said, and reaching over the
seat I tried to get it. It was just out of my reach though. I stretched my arm
further in an effort to get to it but still had no luck. Finally I turned in
my seat and was able to get my fingers on the sweater. That's when I felt the
car start to go over.
     My weight shifting towards the rear of the car had
sent it over. I heard your scream and saw you reach for me, as the car and I
plunged into the river below.
     I didn't mean to scare you, Elisabeth. I really
didn't. I know it has been awhile, but it took me forever to find which house
you lived in. I didn't realize how long I had been in the water, and when I
finally crawled up on the riverbank, you were gone.
     So I walked down the road looking for your house. I
knew it had to be close by. Your earlier directions had told me it was just
beyond that covered bridge. I did go to other houses first, asking if you lived
there, but most everyone closed their door in my face, or in the case of one
old lady never opened it at all.
     Finally I knocked on the right door, and to my
surprise you opened it. You were no longer dressed in your prom dress. You
were instead wearing slacks and a summer top. And you looked different in the
face. Gone were the girlish features of innocence. Instead I could see lines
on your face. Lines caused by age, and I remarked to myself how much older
you looked.
     I held your sweater out to you. "See, I didn't
forget," I said.
     But you didn't take the sweater from my hands.
Instead you wiped the tear back from your face. And whispered something to
me I will never forget…"But you're dead."
     It was then I realized. I had died in the car. Down
in the depths of that river I had breathed my last. But I never forgot your
face. Never forgot the touch of your hand in mine. Never forgot to get your
sweater back to you…
~Fini~
© 2006 Paul D. Aronson. All Rights Reserved.
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