Common Traits of Journalese

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1.   Short, sharp and to the point.

2.     Utilizes complete sentences (newsprint only*)

3.      Limits 50-cent (big) words unless part of a specialized story (i.e. a science story and then it is appropriate whenever possible to paraphrase experts)

4.     Define words not commonly used (see experts above)

5.     Include who, what, when, where, why and how (the higher the better)

6.     Written for masses; medium-level reader (usually 6th-8th grade)

7.     Attributes statements or definitions.

 

*VARIATIONS FOR RADIO-TV: Complete sentences are not always important to these media

And therefore aren’t always required.

BLOGGING & INTERNET: Developing mass media that sometimes use both styles.

 

Examples of how writing/speaking/delivery styles may vary:

 

PROPER ENGLISH SENTENCE:

Mr. Paul L. Jones, a forty-two year old native of the City of Los Angeles, decided today that he would run for election to the office of California State dog catcher by placing his name on the roster.

 

FOR A NEWSPAPER:

Paul L. Jones, 42, of Los Angeles, added his name to the list of candidates for state dog catcher today.

 

FOR RADIO-TV:

Paul Jones – a 42-year old native of L-A – has thrown his hat into the ring in the race for state dog catcher.

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