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Some Preliminary Remarks about Matanya Ophee's
Open Letter to Paul O'Dette
See http://www.orphee.com/RMCG/odette.html
Beware:
Matanya is not always accurate or even truthful. Some of the musical examples are forgeries. It is a self-serving document.
After seven sets of proofs, John Ward, the volume editor, okayed the edition for publication. But Matanya Ophee interfered,
and attempted to "correct" Ward's musical text, producing a great many childish mistakes in the musical text. The "Open Letter"
is an attempt to shift blame from his shoulders to mine.
I had never had any contact
with Paul O'Dette (or any other outsider) about my engraving work for the series of lute music. There was nothing to
discuss. Paul and Matanya met FACE-TO-FACE by appointment at some airport. Accordingly the alleged letter
(version #1)/ telephone call (version #2) from Paul is a fiction created by Matanya Ophee.. The meeting
ended in near fisticuffs. When I met Paul a month later, he was still shaken by the encounter.
Ophee fails to recognize that the editor of
the edition was John M. Ward, Professor emeritus at Harvard Univrsioty, and editorial decisions were his. Not mine. I was
the engraver and followed Ward's instructions, not Ophee's bizarre notation. Nor Ophee's in particular, since he can
barely read music. His editorial concepts were bizarre, and would make us laughing stocks of the music world were we
to follow his example. And his "Odd-man-Out" guitar notation is eccentric and very difficult to play from. But
if he can't read music, how would he know?
In the musical examples,
I have reproduced the authorized versions from my own computer files, and print-outs provided at the time by Matanya, himself.
I also consulted the original copy used by John M. Ward.
Also see
http://mysite.verizon.net/vzepq31c/musexx/index.html
My former teacher at Harvard University John Milton Ward had just published his Music for Elizabethan Lutes and needed to complete its coverage with an edition of
lute music by John Johnson (fl. 1540-1574).
In order to have my assistance as one of the General Editors, the publisher Matanya Ophee agreed to initiate a lute series
that would be headlined with the second edition of my Lute
Works of Francesco Canova da Milano (1497-1543) (Harvard U. Press, 1970). It had become a very popular
work, especially among lutenists and guitarists. It was the best seller in the Harvard Music Series, and the revised
edition would sell very well. All libraries owning the first edition (well over 1000) would purchase the second edition.
I spent a year learning a professional music engraving program and finished the lute and guitar transcriptions
for the Francesco edition. With my edition on his hard disk, Matanya decided that we would have to complete the Johnson
edition first.
His explanation in the Open Letter is not truthful, when he writes "Out of respect to our senior statesman of
the lute John Milton Ward, we decided to first publish the Johnson book." The Francesco edition was slated to come first for several reasons.
Francesco had become a household name, and his music would be an ideal headliner for the series. The second reason was that
we needed publication subvention assistance, and such grants are not given for second or revised edition. But with the Francesco
in print we could show what we could accomplish, and it would be a good example to include in later grant applications
to illustrate the quality of our work.
I should have been suspicious of his motives then, but I unwittingly considered him a valued friend. Little did
I know that he intended to hijack my edition and make me the "nominal," editor.
The Johnson work was a two-year haul. In order that John would have everything as fine tuned as he wished, I graciously
provided SEVEN (7) sets of proofs. I could
not, and did not, start the guitar transcriptions and the tablature until Ward approved a final musical text (the
Seventh Set of Proofs). I carefully checked everything to assure accuracy in the edition. And a professional
lutenist Doug Freundlich was commissioned to check the entire edition to assure everything written was playable on the lute.
(It was expected that Matanya would serve as a double check when he fingered the guitar transcriptions, which I would prepare
from Ward’s lute transcriptions.)
When it was ready, after those seven sets of proofs, I felt it met the high editorial standards that we wished
to set for the series. Alas, it was not to be for very long.
Unbeknownst to us, after he received the final text, Matanya decided to re-write Ward's work. Many of the examples
I cite here come from my computer files of that seventh set of proofs, files which John M. Ward authorized for publication.
I also have the original copy used for the edition.
Matanya created a disaster when he attempted to revise Ward's work. Frequently when changing Ward's musical
text, Ophee produced glaring mistakes. And he refused to correct the many errors, giving bizarre reasons why
they were not mistakes. Four years of hard work were ruined.
The musical examples I provide here are merely a sample of the some thirty pages of mistakes I compiled, after
finding out what Matanya had been doing. We always welcomed his comments because he boasted about his expertise. (It
was a lot of hot air, I now realize.) I never expected that he would alter the approved text without telling us. It is
now apparent to me, and self-evident from what was done to Ward's work, that he is a virtual musical illiterate.
Some of the mistakes he made would shame a five-year-old.
So it was not I who altered Ward's work. The guitar and tablature volumes were derived through computer manipulation
directly from Ward's approved musical text. Matanya's allegations that I had "assumed authorship" are absolutely and totally false. Even
some of the musical examples he provides are forgeries. He had forgotten that the editor was John M. Ward, not me.
I did what I was told. By the editor. Ward. PERIOD. What does Ophee know about lute music?
Zilch.
It is typical MO behavior to accuse an adversary of sins he himself has committed, thereby making it appear that he
is innocent.
As I show in the before and
after examples quoted on the following
pages, Matanya
Ophee is the person who had "assumed authorship."
Most apparent are the many mistakes in notation that a conservatory-trained musician would never make. (Click to see About Arthur J. Ness, Ph.D.) In effect, Matanya had made so
many stupid mistakes in "emending" Ward's authorized text, it then looked like the work of a musical imbecile. And who
would get the blame? Matanya? No the person whose name appeared on the cover, John Milton Ward, a distinguished professor emeritus at Harvard
University.
Matanya often bragged how he was "one of the world's leading
authorities on guitar notation." As I worked through the guitar, which would be fingered and edited
by him, I expected he would lend this expertise to what I was doing in making the guitar transcriptions (directly from the grand staff lute transcriptions that Ward had approved for publication). But such
assistance was not forthcoming, even though I accommodated him by sending the guitar pieces in small batches. Only a
preliminary sample, "The Carman's Whistle" elicited some comments. On October 12, 1993, a year before the edition was
completed, he wrote:
Just got back from Poland. . . The [Carman's] Whistle
looks great. . . While voice-leading is absolutely clear in your work, reading it becomes rather difficult, particularly for
the average guitarist. . . However, it is difficult to come up with generalities. What I suggest is this: when I receive
your files, I will print them out as is, before my editing, and then after editing.
We can then discuss particular matters and you can correct mistakes which I may have committed in my alterations of your input.
The Carman's Whistle is one of Johnson's most complicated
pieces, and so reading it on one staff would be difficult for most players, and it is not a piece for beginners. I sent the
guitar in small batches so that Matanya could begin editing, and then I could benefit from his advice. Matanya is
sadly mistaken, and probably simply fibbing, when he writes:
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. . the guitar notation was done . . . on the basis of his original [keyboard] input before this was corrected for unplayability by Ralph <sic> Freundlich.
This is not true. I sent the final,
Ward-approved seventh set of proofs off to Matanya on August 5, 1993, and the first guitar transcrptions started to follow
only on August 15th. I had personally entered all of Doug's emendations for "playability" in a much earlier set
of proofs. The Freundlich emendations were
incorporated nearly from the beginning, two years earlier, and were used in the guitar versions and tablature. Part of
the frustration was having to wait for Ward's final text. To push ahead with the guitar and tablature volumes would
be foolhardy without a settled text.
For example
here are some of the batches:
- 08-15-93: G02A thru G08C (pieces 1
thru 8)
- 10-13-93: G09A thru G10A ( 9 through
10)
- 10-15-93: G11A thru G13A (11 through
13)
- 10-25-93: G14A thru G15A (14 through
15)
- 10-26-93: G16A thru G16C (16), et cetera.
I heard not
a word until I was nearly finished. Matanya is not being truthful when he writes things like this (Ibid.):
I am not sure I actually mentioned to Arthur the concept of my "house style,"
but I gave him precise parameters on how I want the music to look.
He certainly
had not provided me with any "parameters," or any kind of advice on notation. And given his claims about expertise in
notation, I expected some advice. But none was forthcoming. And I now know why. He is a musical illiterate
and can barely read music, as the samples I provide demonstrate. And since I sent the guitar transcriptions in small
batches, he had ample opportunity to do so. In fact, in one comment he called my work "great."
Furthermore,
John Ward was editor of the volume, and it would have been Ward's responsibility to accept or reject Ophee's "Odd-Note
Guitar Notation" for his edition. Certainly the editors (Ward and I) should have been informed at the
very beginning that the edition would have to use an eccentric, experimental notation devised by a retired airline pilot.
One who can hardly read music! I would have assumed a status of co-editor if I were to change Ward's transcriptions tro "Odd-Man-Out."
Ophee needed to discuss the matter with Ward, himself. Not me.
But I own dozens
of editions of lute music arranged for guitar, and am familiar with the standard notational conventions.
I would never
have envisioned his eccentric "Odd-man-Out" guitar notation in a million years. This he unloaded on us, only after I
was almost finished with the entire project. Nor would I as one of the General Editors accept such untried, experimental
notation for use in a scholarly edition of lute music by an Elizabethan master. We would have to submit the edition
in order to seek publishing subvention, and no one would support an edition in Ophee's bizarre notation.
I heard about
"Odd-man-Out" guitar notation only after I received the
disastrous bandora pieces. He transposed the guitar version AN OCTAVE AND SIXTH HIGHER. "Low Pitch Bandora in A"
becomes "High Pitch Bandora in F." The part goes up to F in the treble clef with four ledger lines!!! I was appalled
by all the mistakes, and when he refused to correct the errors, I had no choice but to depart. I could not have my name
associated with what became a musically illiterate edition.
Some of the
notation he created is so convoluted that it is unplayable (See (2) Critque: Unplayble Musical Notation). Because he cannot read music, he didn't realize that what he had written is unintelligible. He had the screwy idea
that musical notation
"for guitar must be such that reflects the actual sound produced
[my emphasis], without being overly pedantic and tedious. [his emphasis]."
I am unaware
of how musical notation can be pedantic or tedious. Matanya's concept of musical notation is absurd. There are accepted
ways of notating music, and those standards are recognized universally in the music publishing industry. All undergraduate
conservatory students are aware of the basics of proper musical notation. And standards have been set forth in manuals
like the Kurt Stone, Music Notation in the Twentieth Century: A Practical Guidebook (NY:
Norton, 1980). And by organizations such as the Music Publishers Association, of which Matanya is a member. John Ward,
Matanya and I had agreed to follow the proscriptions in the G. Schirmer Manual of Style, a manual on standard musical
notation originally compiled by Gustave Reese, with whom John and I had studied at NYU.
My transcriptions
for guitar, made directly from Ward's lute transcriptions, used standard notational practices for polyphonic guitar textures.
One professional guitarist-editor looked at a sampling, and declared, "what's the fuss and feathers about?" I was using
the same standard guitar polyphonic used in so many editions of lute music for guitar, e.g., Piotr Pozniak (Polskie Wydawnictwo
Muzyczne), Eliot Fisk (Ricordi), Jamie Bellizzi (Mel Bay), Brian Jeffery (Oxford), Emilio Pujol (Schott), Heinz Bischoff (Schott),
Karl Scheit (Universal), and Daniel Benkö (Editio Musica Budapest). And of course
I had Matanya to review wat I had done, trusting that he was familiar with standard guitar notation, of the type used for
transcriptons of lute music.
Matanya started ranting about how it was impossible to play polyphony on a plucked string instrument. Accordingly such guitar transcriptions were mere
ivory tower intellectual exercises "which
may look good on paper, but not be playable on the ... lute."
This was the
subject of the talk with Paul O’Dette, who explained how to play polyphony on guitar, in almost the same language
as I had used. Both of us used similar descriptions of how to play polyphony that Ophee
believed we were talking behind his back. I never discssed my work with Editions Orphee with anyone: there was
nothing to discuss. Matanya lives in the 19th-century, and holds to the belief that the guitar can only be strummed.
Unbelievable. I started thinking about John "Rasgueado" Johnson.
And I am unaware
of any competent edition that uses anything like Matanya's eccentric "Odd-man-Out" guitar notation. It is reminiscent of the Schrade method. Only one serious edition used the Schrade notation, the edition
of lute pieces by Bartolmiej Piekel (Wydawnictwo Dawnej Muzyki Polskiej, 30), and after a few years, it was withdrawn
and the music re-issued in conventional notation, for example.
When I accepted
the position of one of the General Editors, and agreed to make the guitar transcriptions for Ophee to edit, One of my first
samples was a guitar transcription using conventional guitar polyphonic notation, used universally these days. And that's
what I provided, working directly from the files containing Ward's lute transcriptions.
At no time did Ophee tell me that he wanted Schrade-type guitar notation. And he wasn't the editor of the series, anyway. The
General Editors are responsible for establishing standards of musical notation, not the publisher, especially one who has
no exprience with music, and is a functionl music illiterate. And we had settled that before beginning. He wasn't
going to respect our judgment, then he should have told us to go elsewhere. He was from the beginning aware of the editorial
parameters Ward and I had selected. And said that he agreed with them.
The
musical examples illustrate how very difficult it is to decipher "Odd-man-Out" guitar notation. (See especially the
section on unplayable notation. ((2) Critque: Strato-Bandora) and http://mysite.verizon.net/vzepq31c/musexx/jjexx.html
I should add
that Matanya, not Paul O'Dette, initiated the meeting that resulted in the Open Letter. In spite of the somewhat paranoid
comments in the first paragraph of his letter, I had had no contact with Paul regarding
Ophee, or the Johnson edition.
Thus Matanya's
imagination is running loose when he writes (Ibid.),
"I am not sure what Arthur have <sic> told you, but it appears that he told you a lot."
I had tried
to explain to Matanya how to play polyphony on guitar, and Paul's explanation (which precipitated the violent reaction) was
similar to mine. Chris Wilson likewise discusses polyphonic play in much the same way.
Matanya arranged
a face-to-face meeting, by prior agreement at an airport while Paul was on tour. Their words became quite intense, and the
meeting ended in near fisticuffs. The Open Letter followed a week later, and frightened Paul's wife when she saw
it. It seemed threatening to her.
Accordingly,
Matanya is telling a bold-faced LIE when he writes (revised version of letter):
"I received a phone call from Paul O'Dette. ... he would see if he
can patch up the differences. ... He asked me to write."
I had not told
Paul O'Dette about my difficulties with Matanya. That we might be talking behind his back is simply his overworked
imagination getting the better of him. Ophee often has these touches of paranoia, in which he sees many others as enemies.
I was forced
to resign over Matanya's failure to adhere to the editorial parameters we'd agreed upon, and his refusal to correct the "zillions"
of mistakes he'd made in the edition when he surreptitiously attempted to "emend" Ward's approved musical text. I could
not lend my name to such an endeavor. Matanya had my revised Francesco da Milano edition on his hard disk, and he brazenly
told my attorney that my successor as General Editor would edit my edition for Editions Orphee. When my attorney warned him
of copyright laws, someone went to the Copyright Permissions office at Harvard University Press in an attempt to have
the copyright transferred to Ophee.
The Open Letter
was that from the beginning since he sent a copy to at least one guitar magazine, Soundboard. (Probably
tried Classical Guitar, etc, as well.) It is a self-serving instrument with
few truthful statements, designed to shift the burden of blame from his shoulders to mine. The "before" and "after"
examples I quote here speak for themselves. In two short months he destroyed four years of intense work in collaboration
with Masakata Kanazawa, Laurence Berman, John H. Baron, Doug Freundlich, Pat O'Brien, Paul O'Dette, David Dolata, Arthur Ness,
and John M. Ward. All that talent was wasted by a musically ignorant retired airline pilot.
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